Fatewatchers CH1 p2

Good perspective on your buildings. I would advise practicing your anatomy. Additionally, if/when you re-draw this page, take a tip from Jack Kirby - when you have somebody striking a blow, either show right before or right after. Don't show the actual blow being made. This is for the stabbing, punches, kicks, etc. It might seem peculiar, but if you open up just about any comic you have that involves fighting, you'll see what I mean. It just looks better. It seems like you're attempting a manga style page as far as the speed lines go. Speed lines are fine and are a trademark of manga, but the way they look now, it seems more like there's long hair growing out of your characters' appendages. If you do speed lines like this, try to make the whole hand/foot/whatever look blurry or at least along the edge where the speed line is. How to Draw Manga has a very helpful book about drawing fight scenes that you may want to pick up that includes a section specifically about speed lines. While it isn't manga specific, How To Draw Comics The Marvel Way is a good reference for any comic book maker, but especially for one who wants to do something that's action-packed. I feel that not all of the rules apply depending on what kind of comic you're doing, but if nothing else it's a good starting point.